अन्तर्मनको खुसी
अरूको उज्यालो देखेर ईर्ष्या गर्नु भन्दा,
आफैंभित्र आशाको दियो बाल्नु राम्रो।
अरूलाई दुःख दिनु भन्दा,
मौनतालाई आफूभित्र आत्मसात् गर्नु राम्रो।
बुबा-आमाको सम्पत्तिमा घमण्ड गर्नु भन्दा,
आफ्नै पसिनाले अर्जित श्रममा गर्व गर्नु राम्रो।
अरूका विषयमा समय कटाउनु भन्दा,
आफ्नै घर-आँगनमा प्रेम रोप्नु राम्रो।
आफ्नो आस्थालाई टुटाउनु भन्दा,
ईश्वरको मौन उपस्थितिमा भरोसा राख्नु राम्रो।
संसारिक कुराहरूले भयभीत हुनु भन्दा,
अन्तर्मनको सन्देश सुन्नु राम्रो।
पुस्तकबाट सिक्नु राम्रो हो,
तर जीवनका गल्तीहरूबाट सिक्नु अझ राम्रो।
दुनियाँबाट माया खोज्नु अघि,
आफैंलाई अँगाल्न जान्नु राम्रो।
–विराटनगर
प्रतिक्रिया
Very beautiful and meaningful poem dear Dipti…. These words are truth of life which teaches us to take care of ourselves first and foremost…. We are so proud of you… Keep it up dear
Very nice poem👌🙏
Not just words-this is poetry that speaks to the soul. Loved it!
“Every line of this poem is really beautiful, and the words also give a very meaningful message.” It felt truely beautiful ..very proud of you 👍👏✨ Great work 🙏
A very inspiring, thoughtful poem.. amazing 😍
Such Beautiful Relatable Precious Words Nicely Woven into Poetry. The Meaning Hits you deep.
Beautiful thought … Keep it up
Such precious words woven beautifully into poetry. The meaning hits you deep. Great work.
“Every line of this poem is really beautiful and the words also give a very meaningful message ” proud of you 🙏 it felt truely beautiful 👍✨
So nice
Every line of this poem is really beautiful and the words also give a very meaningful message” proud of you 👍 Great work🙏It felt truely beautiful 🤩
Very beautiful poem Dipti…every line has a beautiful meaning…keep up the great work👍
the poem is very relatable..looking forward for more such meaningful poems from you
A beautiful and evocative piece! The imagery flows like a river, carrying emotions that resonate deeply. Your words paint vivid scenes in the mind, and the rhythm feels both gentle and powerful. There’s a timeless quality to your work—it lingers long after reading. Thank you for sharing such heartfelt artistry. Keep writing; the world needs more of this light!
Very nice 👏👏
Keep it up 👍 God bless you
Simple expression profound meaning.
Well done!
Simple expression, profound meaning.
Well done!
Keep it up 👍👍 Well done
Thank you all so much for taking the time to read my poem and your kind words of encouragement. Your support truly means a great deal to me .
Nicely crafted poem. Congratulations Dipti! Keep it up.